Board Thread:Fun and Games/@comment-37022026-20181027112401/@comment-37022026-20181028165556

Westcot wrote: Tw38 wrote: Westcot. Was this a good story? Actually, it was indeed a pretty good story:). My only problems are:

1: Kai said P.I.X.A.L., which is kinda revealing, like, he called everybody else "Master of" but then he outright said P.I.X.A.L..

2: Kai also said "(No surprise there, he loves cake)". Which seems, again, in the way he's telling the story, he wouldn't know that.

3: I honestly don't think Jay and Nya would start a comedy show:). Especially after how embarrassed Jay was after the first show attempt....

4: How did Ahkia guess her father was a Ninja?

Other than that though, GREAT story, GREAT storytelling, SERVES YOU RIGHT LLOYD!!!! YOU SUIT UP!!!! LOL:)! Because Kai was the Ninja Of Fire, and he called Ahkia his little FIRESTARTER.