Board Thread:Fun and Games/@comment-37022026-20181027112401/@comment-36592086-20181028180807

Tw38 wrote: Tw38 wrote: Westcot wrote: Tw38 wrote: Westcot. Was this a good story? Actually, it was indeed a pretty good story:). My only problems are:

1: Kai said P.I.X.A.L., which is kinda revealing, like, he called everybody else "Master of" but then he outright said P.I.X.A.L..

2: Kai also said "(No surprise there, he loves cake)". Which seems, again, in the way he's telling the story, he wouldn't know that.

3: I honestly don't think Jay and Nya would start a comedy show:). Especially after how embarrassed Jay was after the first show attempt....

4: How did Ahkia guess her father was a Ninja?

Other than that though, GREAT story, GREAT storytelling, SERVES YOU RIGHT LLOYD!!!! YOU SUIT UP!!!! LOL:)! Because Kai was the Ninja Of Fire, and he called Ahkia his little FIRESTARTER. 1. Because I don´t think P.I.X.A.L is going to be Samurai X in the future.

2. I was saying the parenthesis part.

3. Well, Jay DOES joke a lot...

4. Read the reply above.

1: It's still KINDA specific.... You could have said, like, "other robot" or something.

2: Okay, got it:).

3: True, but, he and Nya doing that? Like, as a full time thing? Also, it doesn't feel like something you would do to settle down....

Kai: So, I'm going to go live in a nice house and start a family. How are you guys gonna settle down?

Zane: I'm going to study the history of NINJAGO with P.I.X.A.L..

Kai: Sounds relaxing, nice! Cole?

Cole: I'm going to open a bakery.

Kai: Eh, makes sense. Jay?

Jay: I'M GONNA START A COMEDY SHOW WITH NYA!!!!

Kai: ....

4: True, but, Cole could've even been the one to say "FIRESTARTER", and that wouldn't have made him the Master of Fire.... Still though, clever word choice:).

BONUS POINT!!!!

5: BTW, I think it was a pretty great story; I'm just pointing out a couple things I noticed:).