Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-26509603-20150805144401/@comment-26509603-20160701203625

TheFallenNinja wrote: Well, maybe. But I have a new plot. Here it goes, hope you like it! I name it, Ninjago: New Age

The ninja has been protecting Ninjago for years. Until the evil force 'xxx (I did not plan the villain yet)' Leaving only Zane, Kai and Lloyd as the survivors. Kai and the rest kept the children of the Ninja safe. The last three realised there children had their parents powers. Flame and Ash (Kai and Skylor's Son), Shard (Zane and P.I.X.A.L's Son, who Zane made and P.I.X.A.L helped program), Zap and Wisp (Jay and Nya's children. Zap:Son Wisp:Daughter) and Axel (Cole and ???'s Son) All became ninja, Flame is the main protagonist, unfortunately, Ash got jealous as he had Amber but Flame had Golden Fire (new element) Ash turns on him and is banished out. Ash, angered, tells Flame he will kill him. Kai and Skylor try to convince him to come back, but Ash leaves. Ash's rage gives him a element Darkness and he became evil (working on plot) 1. Is "New Age" just what you'd think would work as a better name, or the name of a separate series with other concepts?

2. The idea of Nya, Cole, and Jay dying in battle or opposition to this new threat seems a little dark for the show. I can't think of any other reason that they'd be gone, since your plot appears to follow the Ninja at middle age (as opposed to the elderly age that was established for "Prodigies").

3. The names of the children should not be based solely on elements (especially to the point where some of the names don't sound like names, and are just words). Sorry to be blunt, but I'd rather get it across to everyone now than continue to tell people later in the forum. Also, since we're just throwing around ideas (and for you, just the plot) there's no need to specify names of new characters (which you recognized by not naming the villain).

4. Why are the Ninja surprised that the children of Elemental Masters hold the powers of the elements themselves? All of the Ninja are familiar with the concept of elements being passed down through the generations.

5. I suggest that no one identify the main protagonist of any series ideas. It also seems a bit repetitive to give that role to Kai's son, since Kai was an exclusive protagonist of the "Masters of Spinjitzu" series.

6. Adding a new element? I'm not a huge fan of that. Where does this new element come from (since elements don't combine)? Also, what happens to Fire? Fire is a main element, and suddenly it doesn't exist?

7. "Turned on him"? Like, sibling rivalry? How does this justify banishment? And, banishment from what?

8. Again, killing. This time there is a direct threat to killing someone. Too dark.

9. So, Kai and Skylor try to convince one of their sons to come back from banishment? Who banished him and how do Kai and/or Skylor have any power over this?

10. Emotions suddenly dictate the element that an Elemental Master has? I mean, I get that if his element is Amber, he could copy the element Destruction, if there was an Elemental Master with that element, but still. Also, if this all started with Ash being jealous of his brother's element, why didn't he just copy that element? And why didn't Skylor teach Ash right off to be proud of his element and to use it wisely?

Thank you for your plot idea, and I hope you continue to add your opinions to the forum.